Stories

After my divorce, I started a new job, and every morning I left a little money for the elderly woman who sat by the station, worn down as if life had pressed her into the concrete. One gray April morning in Atlanta, just as I was about to catch the MARTA train downtown, she suddenly grabbed my hand with unexpected strength and whispered a warning that made my blood run cold—I shouldn’t go home that night.


After my divorce finalized last fall, I moved into a modest one-bedroom apartment in Decatur and started a new job as an administrative assistant for a small accounting firm in downtown Atlanta. My routine was simple: walk to the station, catch the MARTA train, and then walk two more blocks to the office. Every morning, without fail, I passed an elderly woman who sat near the station stairs. Her name was Evelyn Brooks, though most commuters barely gave her a glance. She wore the same faded gray coat, the fabric thin in places, and shoes that looked older than I was. Something in her posture—bent, tense, bracing against the world—reminded me how life could grind a person down.

After the divorce, I had felt smaller, almost transparent. Maybe that was why I always stopped. Every morning, I placed a few dollars in her tin cup and offered a smile she rarely returned, though she sometimes muttered a soft “thank you” or “God bless.”

But one gray April morning, just as the clouds were threatening to split open, something happened that stopped me in my tracks.

I was running late. My supervisor, Mark, had warned me twice about punctuality, and I didn’t want another lecture. I hurried down the steps, pulled a five-dollar bill from my pocket, and bent toward the cup.

Before the bill could fall, Evelyn’s hand shot out and clamped around my wrist. I gasped. Her grip was surprisingly strong, almost desperate.

I looked at her, startled. “Are you alright?”

Her pale blue eyes met mine, and for the first time since I’d known her, she looked fully present—alert, focused, afraid.

“You should stay somewhere else tonight,” she whispered, her voice shaking but determined. “Don’t go home.”

The train screeched into the station behind me. People brushed past, irritated that I was blocking the stairs, but I couldn’t pull away. Something in her expression made my stomach twist.

“What are you talking about?” I asked.

She scanned the crowd nervously. “Please. Promise me you won’t go back to your apartment tonight.”

“Why? What happened?”

Evelyn’s lips trembled. She leaned closer.

“I saw someone,” she whispered. “I saw someone go into your place last night. Someone who wasn’t you.”

My breath caught.

“Who?” I nearly choked out.

She swallowed hard.

“I don’t know,” she said. “But they’re still there.”And then—she released my wrist.

The train doors chimed behind me.

I didn’t know whether to run toward the train… or away from home forever.

I barely remember getting onto the train. My mind spun in frantic circles as I gripped the pole and tried to steady my breathing. Evelyn was homeless. She could be confused. She could have mistaken my door for someone else’s. Maybe she had hallucinated the entire thing. But the conviction in her eyes… that was what terrified me.

By the time I reached Peachtree Center, my hands were shaking. I walked into the office, pretending everything was normal, but my thoughts kept drifting back to my apartment. Had I locked the door properly last night? I was sure I had. I always double-checked since moving in alone.

At lunch, I stepped outside and called the leasing office.
“Hi, this is Sarah Mitchell, from unit 3B,” I said. “Has maintenance entered my apartment recently?”

The manager hesitated. “Not that I see. You didn’t request anything.”

“No one else has access?”

“Just us and you.”

That didn’t help my growing panic.

After work, I considered going straight to a hotel, but the idea of running from my own home made me feel foolish. Still, I couldn’t shake Evelyn’s warning. So instead, I walked to the station again. Evelyn wasn’t there. Her cardboard mat was gone, her tin cup vanished. It was as if she had never existed.

My nerves twisted even tighter.

By mid-evening, I gave in. I called my friend Jenna, told her I didn’t feel safe going home, and asked if I could sleep on her couch. She agreed instantly.

But at 10 p.m., lying on her lumpy sofa, something inside me snapped. I couldn’t stand the uncertainty anymore. I needed to know.

“Jenna, come with me,” I said suddenly. “I need to check my apartment.”

She frowned. “Sarah, if someone is in there—”

“That’s why you’re coming,” I whispered, forcing a joke. “To scream louder than me.”

We drove back to Decatur. My hands were cold and sweating as I stepped out of her car. The building was quiet. Not a single window lit.

We crept down the hallway. My door—3B—looked normal. Untouched.

I inserted my key. Turned it.

The moment the door swung open, both Jenna and I gasped.

My living room was destroyed.

Couch slashed open. Drawers yanked out. Papers scattered.

Someone had been searching for something.

And they hadn’t bothered hiding it.

Jenna grabbed my arm. “Sarah, we need to get out and call the police—now.”

I nodded, backing out of the apartment. My heart hammered so hard I tasted metal. We ran down the hallway and called 911 from the parking lot. Officers arrived within minutes, swept through the apartment, and confirmed what I already knew: someone had been there—and probably recently.

An officer named Detective Collins pulled me aside. “Nothing suggests forced entry. Are you sure no one else has a key?”

“Only the leasing office,” I said. “And me.”

“And the ex-husband?” he asked gently.

I stiffened. “Kevin moved to Texas. We don’t even talk.”

He made a note but didn’t seem convinced.

The police found muddy footprints near the balcony door, but they couldn’t tell how long they’d been there. My mind kept circling back to Evelyn’s words: I saw someone go into your place last night.

After the officers left, Jenna insisted I stay at her place again. I agreed. But as we walked to her car, a figure stepped out from behind the dumpster.

I screamed.

But it was Evelyn.

She looked smaller than usual, trembling, her eyes wide with fear.

“I’m sorry,” she said. “I didn’t mean to scare you.”

I hurried toward her. “Where were you? Why did you say someone was in my apartment?”

She took a shaky breath.

“I sleep near your building sometimes,” she whispered. “Behind the bushes. Last night I saw a man go up the back stairs. Tall, dark jacket, gloves. He pried your balcony door open with something. I wanted to warn you, but by the time you came this morning… I was scared he might still be there.”

Jenna stared at her. “Why didn’t you tell the police?”

“No one listens to people like me,” she said simply.

Her voice broke something inside me.

Over the next hour, we convinced her to come with us to the station. She repeated everything to the detectives. They took her statement seriously this time, especially after confirming the tool marks on my balcony door.

Two weeks later, the police arrested a man connected to several burglaries in the area. He had been watching apartments, targeting single women. They found stolen items in his storage unit—including some of mine.

As for Evelyn, the officers helped connect her with a local shelter. She now has a clean bed, meals, and a caseworker helping her get permanent housing.

I visit her every week.

Sometimes help comes from the people the world looks away from.

Please share this story—someone needs to be reminded that compassion might save a life.

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